@Chekov Nothing against you redoing the chapter (great job btw) but just out right deleting the previous version means the discussion from it gets lost in whatever void it gets sent to unless a mod retrieves it. As a suggestion, it might have been better to have the title include "version 2" or "improved version" or something. Luckily I did a post to it so here is the
discussion in case people care about it. Thanks for the chapter.