Dark Mortal - Vol. 1 Ch. 13 - Friday (1/2)

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I like the author's treatment of time. We had no idea there even had been something important the previous day, just so he can drop it like a bomb.

I also like his attention to detail. The tumble-upon-each-other rom-com scene is a staple of comics, but he actually drew it like one should - with the guy holding the girl's head to stop it from hitting the floor.

Seriously, I wonder whether this webtoonist has previous works. His technique looks so mature. If this is his debut work, he's a master of his trade.
 
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thanks for the chapter. Wonder if the other shadow is the one taking over
 
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I like how the author made the Friday flashback start on the 13th chapter.
 
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Me: Hmm, he's got a real nice body...
Him: Wait? Did my body always look like this? *looks down* Huh...? *blushes* It's too big...

That's such a genuine, rare reaction. Love the innocent yet sexy way it plays out. Totally fits the character.

Really impressed by this manhwa. Looks like it's not well known, but I know few titles as polished.

EDIT: Also yeah, that little detail about holding her head, that blows my mind. Shows that even a cliché scene can work if done right.
 

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