Decision To Leave - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

[MangaDex]

 

[Orangechrisy]

Interesting start, kinda got some art quirks tho like the blonde girl having a ribbon attached to nothing on her collarbone in the first chapter that isn't there in the second, or how her shirt is in the first page of the second chapter as if its missing half of it, and some inconsistencies with faces/hair it felt like. But overall nice, hope you continue

 

[Ryanisthebest14]

Interesting start, kinda got some art quirks tho like the blonde girl having a ribbon attached to nothing on her collarbone in the first chapter that isn't there in the second, or how her shirt is in the first page of the second chapter as if its missing half of it, and some inconsistencies with faces/hair it felt like. But overall nice, hope you continue

I uh did chapter 1 when I just started drawing (which is funny cuz this is my second work published) so please forgive me . I think you can tell how the style changed suddenly in chapter 2 page 2, and that's cuz I'm drawing it presently now after learning more abt drawing. Thanks for the comment, rlly appreciate it and ya made my day by being so nice abt the critique

 

[Orangechrisy]

I uh did chapter 1 when I just started drawing (which is funny cuz this is my second work published) so please forgive me . I think you can tell how the style changed suddenly in chapter 2 page 2, and that's cuz I'm drawing it presently now after learning more abt drawing. Thanks for the comment, rlly appreciate it and ya made my day by being so nice abt the critique

True, and I gotta say the style you got going on now is very nice, keep it up!

 

[quorramoon]

i love the color here, great work!! i can feel the warmth. and that night city view, gorgeous. alright love ittt

 

[Wachtail]

Man I really love your art. The small inconsistencies in the faces and all give some charm to it as well!
I'll definitely continue reading it, cheers!