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W w1987g Dex-chan lover Joined Jan 8, 2023 Messages 912 Aug 18, 2023 #2 I see dad is still in mourning.... he might as well burn down the entire world
E Elhao Supporter Joined Dec 29, 2018 Messages 2,011 Aug 18, 2023 #5 Really hard to identify who is talking in this chapter. The at several points clearly mixed up personal pronouns don't help.
Really hard to identify who is talking in this chapter. The at several points clearly mixed up personal pronouns don't help.
Seinvolf Dex-chan lover Joined Apr 26, 2018 Messages 4,318 Aug 18, 2023 #6 Thank u always for ur great work... ^^...
M Michael_Chandra Banned Joined Jan 26, 2020 Messages 633 Aug 18, 2023 #7 Elhao said: Really hard to identify who is talking in this chapter. The at several points clearly mixed up personal pronouns don't help. Click to expand... I suspect there's multiple places where the wrong pronoun stuff was used.
Elhao said: Really hard to identify who is talking in this chapter. The at several points clearly mixed up personal pronouns don't help. Click to expand... I suspect there's multiple places where the wrong pronoun stuff was used.
M Meridis Dex-chan lover Joined May 30, 2018 Messages 1,374 Aug 19, 2023 #8 mc seems way to callous about the circumstances that gave him this second chance. Like, a child has no say in the circumstances which they were born but he wasn't born a 'child' and he discussed it with the goddess.
mc seems way to callous about the circumstances that gave him this second chance. Like, a child has no say in the circumstances which they were born but he wasn't born a 'child' and he discussed it with the goddess.