Deliheal Yondara Moto Doukyuusei ga Kita - Ch. 2

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Hi Tatsuwaipu-sensei, I’m the editor approving your artwork today

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What the HELL are those lips doing
 
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Author casually putting his prototypes in one of the panel.

Also girl is forgetting her mission, the whole point seeing him is so she can motivate herself back by watching someone else working on their dream. This guy is so not worth it, he barely remembered her while she pretty much remembered everything about him, it's not fair.
I mean, I give him props about the fact that he remembered about her fear of thunder and acted instinctively to comfort her


It's kinda shaky for him but this is only ch 2, let's see where this goes
 
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They were only classmates that barely talked, he wasn't in love with her, so why would he remember much about her?
By this definition if someone doesn't also love you without you ever doing something about it, it's not worth it.
He did find her cute and there was some stuff he remembered about her, big example being her fear of thunder, he didn't even hesitate to comfort her as soon as she tweaked out
 
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He did find her cute and there was some stuff he remembered about her, big example being her fear of thunder, he didn't even hesitate to comfort her as soon as she tweaked out
That's why I said much, he does remember things but the guy I responded to said like it's not enough
 
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Sometimes it can be stupid, but contrived ways for two people that want to bang to do so is actually super fun when it doesn't overstate its welcome in smut, or when it is fakeout bullshit.

I didn't think much on "he loves her or not" question. But I can say he is kind of a mindless bafoon by just "hey good bye, see ya" in the middle of a freaking storm. At least offer her to stay until it calms down or give her an umbrella you dumdumb.

And I gotta say, I'm a sucker for an artist-muse-ship in hentai.
 
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Won't lie, premise is stupid af, but also interesting. Can't explain why, but I want to read more. Plus, art is top fucking tier.
 

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