Destined Pair? I Disagree! - Ch. 0

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It's promising? Really fast paced if this is indeed the first chapter, not the prologue, but it's fine for now I guess.
 
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sorry for the mistakes
- kingdom alice
-nobles and traders/peasants and slaves
-she was once the most loved soul by god
-is willing to give up all love from the god
sorry again for the disappointment, thank you for all your support
hope you like the series
 
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Well, that was very confusing, though I guess that's typical for chinese stories. This looked to be only a prologue so the next chapter will probably make more sense.

Oh yeah, it feels like the last bubble should've been "this time I won't regret anything" instead of "time I won't regret anything this."

Also, if you guys notice a typo or a mistake after releasing the chapter, you can sneakily replace the old version with the new and nobody will have to know :>
 
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the look he gave her when she said that leads me to believe there’s way more to it nonetheless this is interesting
 
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a few other manga have put the prolog as chapter 1 recently but the ones ive seen have been better then the prologs that are actually spoiling the entire story.
 
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Well you can't set people free of god especially if you didn't ask the named god.(as royalty it's mostly bringing the clergy under control)
 
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Ugh, male leads in chinese shoujos are usually all the same. If its not an ore-sama dick head, its a Mr. Rich Iceberg. Come on, give a non-cliche character.
 

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