Devilchi - Ch. 53 - Good Morning

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Oh my how very touching, I'm glad the sister is fine now.... But fuck the guy regardless, trying to kill innocent people makes you a bad person no matter what.
 
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He sould have healed the Loli, then wait til she wake up and told her everything the two fucker did. this would have be fun
 
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I really don't feel any sympathy for that guy. You can drop all the tear jerking backstories on him all you want, it still doesn't change the fact this guy kidnapped and tried to murder someone for their own interests.

Heal the loli, rip off the brother's wings!
 
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As far as redemption arcs go, that was pretty heckin' lame. In the grand bad-writing tradition, we're told, not shown that he's actually a really good guy.

Instead, we're told he's a really good guy, but all his actions make him look like a selfish scumbag instead.
 
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yeeeeeaaaaaa... skipped this chapter except for the last 2 pages. don't care about fucktard's backstory.
 
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Oh look, he did all the bad things for his lil sis, surely we can forgive him, right? >_> /sarcasm
 
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That is the biggest load of BS.
What he was doing wasn't even guaranteed to actually help his sister, just get them to look at him. It would have been more logical to spend all of his days trying to look for a counter-curse or to trying to get more powerful on actual merit.

If they spun it as "this guy is irredeemably evil, but he wanted to help his sister by doing this", I would have bought it. The logic would have been sound for a power grab with the side-merit of healing his sister. But you can't pretend he was just a good guy doing bad things. Good guys don't do bad things like murder.
 
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"Your are a good guy at heart"

Sure. Good guy won't think twice about killing an innocent girl just for saving his sister. That happens all the time.

And I think someone already said this already but his method doesn't even guarantee that his sister will be cured. What a lame excuse for redemption.
 
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Oh come on, dude just want to save his little sister out of desperation. Give him a chance.
 

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