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E Ey_man Member Joined Apr 30, 2020 Messages 214 Nov 2, 2020 #2 Thanks for the chapter. Feedback: check when have/has is used. I could be wrong though English isn't my first language.
Thanks for the chapter. Feedback: check when have/has is used. I could be wrong though English isn't my first language.
E Ey_man Member Joined Apr 30, 2020 Messages 214 Nov 6, 2020 #4 @BreakerRvP I don't want to be rude but in the 5th panel it should be "Those who live here either have a terminal illness or have lost hope in life". Good job by the way I enjoyed reading this story.
@BreakerRvP I don't want to be rude but in the 5th panel it should be "Those who live here either have a terminal illness or have lost hope in life". Good job by the way I enjoyed reading this story.
Kaarme Dex-chan lover Joined Jan 18, 2018 Messages 17,951 Feb 23, 2021 #6 Seems like a nice neighbourhood, except for the residents. But you can't have everything, right?