Dodoma

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Apr 29, 2020
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Joke ruined.
Pretty ok but not much support holding the plot together. Feel like its just falling apart.
characters seem to die before you can care and sometimes the MC just kinda forgets that everone he's lived with and cares about are dead. To the point that i even forgot
has potential
 
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Apr 8, 2018
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Interesting story. I get the main character is 11 but hes kind of annoying. Especially when all he does is talk about his brother. My brother this, my brother that. Damn bro i get it, you love your nii-san.
 

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