This story is actually pretty nice. Really nice comedic moments, and great story. But the typesetting could be better. If TS sees this, please center the text. If there is a bubble that has two sentences in it, make sure they aren't on the same line.
Ex:
I don't think
that's nice.
Are you sure
you're ok with
doing this?
Idk how it'll show up on here, but its a start. At least you aren't using comic sans as the font lol.