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ocsibrm Dex-chan lover Joined Oct 18, 2018 Messages 591 Oct 9, 2025 #2 I can see why this was just a one shot. Nice, but not enough to leave me wanting more.
ghostkun Dex-chan lover Joined Jan 18, 2018 Messages 2,357 Oct 9, 2025 #3 It's... a bit haphazard. It just feels like everything is happening all at once and only semi-coherently. Feel like there's some potential, if the author could slow down and pace things a little more clearly.
It's... a bit haphazard. It just feels like everything is happening all at once and only semi-coherently. Feel like there's some potential, if the author could slow down and pace things a little more clearly.
