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…so was Dolomite just really big or were the guys really small?
 
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…so was Dolomite just really big or were the guys really small?
Oh no...she needed a huge ass factory to run that tiny body. Edison's last statement is him realizing how amazing God's creation of humans are seeing that our body basically have the output of a huge ass factory in our small frame.
 
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It's a good moral of the story, but...the story itself is not one I liked or disliked. Felt flat.
 
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It's a good moral of the story, but...the story itself is not one I liked or disliked. Felt flat.
This is from a magazine that is basically about making extremely short horror stories, so there isn't much time to develop things. His other works are less flat.
 
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Lol. This is a very abbreviated version of Mouryou no Hako.
 
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…so was Dolomite just really big or were the guys really small?
Looks like she's just a head mounted onto a table, and that somewhere else there's a large facility that handles body fluids and respiration. I like the weird machinery that looks like a large heart in particular.
The men were just unlucky to enter the 'stomach unit', and it seems like efficiency isn't great if whole pig carcasses are being thrown in there.
 

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