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K kerrowe Member Joined Mar 28, 2019 Messages 360 Nov 8, 2020 #2 This one does feel more comfortably sized. If it's really a double chapter I wonder where the 2 merge.
This one does feel more comfortably sized. If it's really a double chapter I wonder where the 2 merge.
C Callonia Joined Nov 12, 2018 Messages 20 Nov 8, 2020 #3 If it was up to me, I'd just forget about the car and the food in it and go far far away.
H Hell_Satan Aggregator gang Joined Sep 10, 2018 Messages 929 Nov 8, 2020 #4 Two chapters in one how short or cut up are the chapters.
S SodapopKevin Dex-chan lover Joined Jan 5, 2020 Messages 70 Nov 8, 2020 #5 Thanks for the upload! Honestly, I think the writer needs to learn how to pace a story better. 2 chapters (40+ pages) and all they did was have an uneventful drive to an objective.
Thanks for the upload! Honestly, I think the writer needs to learn how to pace a story better. 2 chapters (40+ pages) and all they did was have an uneventful drive to an objective.
staberas Group Leader Joined Dec 20, 2018 Messages 294 Nov 8, 2020 #6 @kerrowe When Riot shouts "Yahoo " on the truck
dancur Fed-Kun's army Joined Jun 17, 2020 Messages 352 Nov 9, 2020 #7 the story is progressing at a real slow crawl with this 2 chapter pack being them just driving and talking
the story is progressing at a real slow crawl with this 2 chapter pack being them just driving and talking