Doukyo Shiteiru Kensei no Onna Shishou ga Kawaisugite Mainichi Shiawase Desu - Vol. 1 Ch. 5

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Spotted a few mistakes, but overall it's good. Page 7, first case: "It's just so cute, I can't standard, he makes my heart skip a beat..." Pretty sure it should be "I can't stand it". First bubble of page 31 too. "He's [a] good kid, right?" I would advise against using "but" too often. It's supposed to link to the next sentence or end an enumeration. I would've written the next part as such: "He's terrible with the sword, but he is earnest." Anyway, my 2 cents.
 
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Spotted a few mistakes, but overall it's good. Page 7, first case: "It's just so cute, I can't standard, he makes my heart skip a beat..." Pretty sure it should be "I can't stand it". First bubble of page 31 too. "He's [a] good kid, right?" I would advise against using "but" too often. It's supposed to link to the next sentence or end an enumeration. I would've written the next part as such: "He's terrible with the sword, but he is earnest." Anyway, my 2 cents.
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