A little rushed in the second half, I guess?
As right from the start, the author wants to introduce main characters, he did it well in the first half, and also the main conflict. But the second half is a little out of thin air. Garyou new story out of thin air, and the editor trust out of thin air, like immediately trust him.
Also, due to the second half, which is, I would say, like a totally new chapter, the author puts too much information in one episode, making it kinda confusing.