Dragon Ball After (Doujinshi) - Ch. 12 - Futodama

[MangaDex]

 

[BalrogDeMorgoth]

Couldn't Goku just use a barrier?

 

[YamiryuuZero]

It is impressive how much close to Toriyama's style this guy gets! I think this is just the best fan content in terms of replicating his style that I have ever seen!

But it's still not perfect, sometimes the paneling is difficult to follow and I need to take a double check to make sure I understood the flow of the battle and the pacing needs work. Too much stopping and dialogue when it would have been better to finish the action before having Goku give his analysis of something.

That said, if this author can fix those small issues, he could end up taking Toyotarou's job!

 

[Midoriha]

This became impossible to understand midway.
If this is machine tl, at least edit and proofread properly, and if not, then you're in dire need of a new translator.

 

[CashFreshPrince]

Bro this translation is so ass too read