I know this starts off as a pure parody of the DBz events but this actually has better story than Super. I'm interested to see where the author can go with this before he hits a dead end.
Seeing Goku not being the center of everything feels fresh, but there is still the problem of the cast being over reliant on Poccolo. I know, I know, he is the main character here, but I like how he teaches Goku and Nappa early on. I wanted this dynamic to be kept but I'm not complaining or anything since this is a core fault of the main work itself.