Dragon no Ko - Ch. 11

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It feels weird to have the major suddenly be kovalsky's sister, but it's even weirder that all of a sudden kovalsky's looking for his long lost sister.

I guess it's in line with the other twists but still feels a bit amateurih or maybe more like this manga is part of a bigger story
 
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It feels weird to have the major suddenly be kovalsky's sister, but it's even weirder that all of a sudden kovalsky's looking for his long lost sister.

I guess it's in line with the other twists but still feels a bit amateurih or maybe more like this manga is part of a bigger story
The promise Kovalsky talked about in Chapter 2 was that Major would help him find his sister, but it didn't really have much of a payoff and having him die 5 pages after the reveal didn't help either (there's a little more to be told about this relation later though)
 
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How many twists do you want this chapter to have?
Mangaka: yes

Man the writing is all over the place. No setup, No foreshadowing, no sense of pacing.
The story is spinning in circles.
I was fine with that simple artstyle but man the storyboard is a mess...
 

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