LOL, I feel like this was written by a teenager. 😂
P penguinslovesnow Member Joined Mar 21, 2018 Messages 226 Feb 12, 2021 #21 LOL, I feel like this was written by a teenager. 😂
H Hoshi219 Joined Nov 28, 2020 Messages 75 Mar 2, 2021 #22 Ummm.... the story kinda off? But white-haired man is the best :>
P PraiseBuns Joined Oct 25, 2018 Messages 26 Mar 16, 2021 #23 The story's all over the place. Too much happening within a few pages. This is STILL the first chapter.
The story's all over the place. Too much happening within a few pages. This is STILL the first chapter.
