Bro here is complaining about a plotline that started literally 3 chapters ago being too slow to wrap up, if this is not peak ADHD brainrot I don't know what is.I swear if they dont wrap this twin shit up quickly im out
We get it, the alien might be lying, get to the point holy fuck
I feel like that is appropriate for thematic reasons. Both of our MCs clearly feel isolated, to the point where not only do they not see other people as characters, they barely see each other as characters.I feel this chapter was in the right direction, but it still feels a bit empty and aimless. I hope each chapter will continue to improve as I kinda like this manga for some reason
By "empty," I mean this feels like a low-budget movie with only two actors, making the world seem oddly vacant as they walk around. I get that sense while reading this. It’s as if only what they discuss in that moment exists. If we had seen posters of this singer in the background, or her playing on TV earlier in the story, the ticket reveal would have felt more natural.
To me this reads as the editor telling the author "hey you're everywhere man, you need to focus the story" so he came up with this singer that's popular with aliens between chapters.
Good point. Even if the brother exists there is no way to know who did it. I think he will kill the brother and then find some old photo that proves the other did it and he was mislead.Even if he finds Lally☆ at the concert, killing him would 100% prove he's the Alien serial killer. Maybe thats the trap: Lilly gets rid of his brother and pins it on Kitami.