Drama Queen - Ch. 7 - Nauseating

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Is this story AI generated? The plot is being dropped and picked up again quicker than a hot potato and none of the characters make any sense at all. They betray the company and blow up their partnership just to continue on like literally nothing happened? What? And what's with this schizophrenic plot progression? Nomomoto just randomly helping out an alien and chugging more food creates new story how? And we are already getting the pay off for the "my parents are dead" plot? Either this shit is getting axed or the author forget their meds, holy shit.
 
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Is this story AI generated? The plot is being dropped and picked up again quicker than a hot potato and none of the characters make any sense at all. They betray the company and blow up their partnership just to continue on like literally nothing happened? What? And what's with this schizophrenic plot progression? Nomomoto just randomly helping out an alien and chugging more food creates new story how? And we are already getting the pay off for the "my parents are dead" plot? Either this shit is getting axed or the author forget their meds, holy shit.
Iunno, the story made sense to me. Nomamoto is just written as an extremely carefree character who from time to time would ponder her own lack of goals just to be distracted by more food. The relationship between the company and the duo is addled with distrust and aims of personal gain since the start, so they're keeping a facade that nothing is wrong. The tailing sidequest is just a plot device for Nomamoto's inner monologue. Though I will agree that Kitami's story is progressing quicker than I expect.

The writing is unconventional, sure but everything is still consistent. And is still interesting enough to earn my attention at the very least :pepehmm:
 
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Little soon to randomly have the alien that killed his parents show up out of nowhere isn't it? Author running out of ideas?
 
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I definitely can't wait for Nomamoto's growth into a person who cares for others, because as she is she's kind of annoying more than anything. Feel bad for Kitami.
 
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aww Nomamoto in a dress
how cute and being friendly with the neighbor!?
what a good girl who would never think about eating aliens cause she hates em
 

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