Drawing: Saikyou Mangaka wa Oekaki Skill de Isekai Musou Suru! - Vol. 5 Ch. 45 - The Invincible Genius Summoner: Part 2

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"He specializes in golems."
They are in for a real treat, aren't they?

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This translation is quite the step up from the old version...
But I've noticed some strange constructed sentences. Some more proofreading is in order.

Page 13 : "even though I wasn't suppose to". Past tense "supposed"

Page 14 : "Did that golem... just jumped...?!" The verb "Do" is already conjugated in past tense (did) so it's "jump", infinitive.
"you're using your talent to trample on people's hearts is violent" What are those two words at the end?
=> Just put a dot after "hearts" and the sentence won't sound weird. Either that or rephrase it in a way that's not too confusing.

Call it nitpicking but those basic grammar mistakes are more likely to be made by 5th graders in elementary school.
 
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"You lied about your rank!"

Dude didn't rank himself... he didn't even want to be here.
 
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yeah. When they find out he specializes in mechas instead.
Or is he a moe/chibi type of mangaka?
I'm not going to spoil what happens in the next chapters, but keep in mind that his summons from when he was a kid is different to what he can do now, he has shown his summoning capabilities when he was with the bodyguard and mage.
 
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I'm not going to spoil what happens in the next chapters, but keep in mind that his summons from when he was a kid is different to what he can do now, he has shown his summoning capabilities when he was with the bodyguard and mage.
I were making a joke, about how he is a mangaka, and that mangakas love mechas.
You use English because it's your first language, I use it because it's the only one you know
Isn't 5th grade in middle-school? Unless you are speaking perhaps specifically about the american system? And not the normal ones that groups them in threes?
But either way, afaik generally people who learned English as a 2nd language tends to have better grammar than natives, so your response actually reinforces his point (assuming you learned it as a 2nd language, and not a 3rd. Because yes, the 3rd language is only starting at around 5th grade, and you would likely not know about how to conjugate of verbs yet).
 
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Kinda funny how last chapter ended with the ending being a golem slide, and this one ends with a golem kick. Here comes the procession of chapters ending in golem martial arts moves of increasing power! (But not really)
 
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Why would you interpret it like that? And what gives you the right to gratuitously insult me over that?
If you felt insulted it wasn't my intention and I'm sorry, but it was an unnecessary addition. The only reason I feel as though it was unnecessary is because of the need to compare it to a 5th grader.

If you felt insulted at what I said, then yours can also be interpreted the same way.
 
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I were making a joke, about how he is a mangaka, and that mangakas love mechas.

Isn't 5th grade in middle-school? Unless you are speaking perhaps specifically about the american system? And not the normal ones that groups them in threes?
But either way, afaik generally people who learned English as a 2nd language tends to have better grammar than natives, so your response actually reinforces his point (assuming you learned it as a 2nd language, and not a 3rd. Because yes, the 3rd language is only starting at around 5th grade, and you would likely not know about how to conjugate of verbs yet).
5th grade's always been elementary school. America's weird in that middle school is 6th to 8th while high school is 9th to 12th. Other countries usually have 7th to 9th for middle school and 10th to 12th for high school.
 

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