Page 4 : I can tell those are teeth and not his left eye.
It looks weird enough to be Creepypasta level, or should I say Copypasta? ^^
And that's not the first time I've seen that. In the previous chapter, chapter 47 page 11 :
It seems you go through a really difficult time when the text overlaps with the image... If you told me you hate redrawing, I would believe you.
Back to chapter 48, Page 9 : "Did he just
defeated two high leveled summoned beasts at once?!" It's "defeat", no need to conjugate with did behind.
"That's an authentic Divine
Beasts Summoning" He did summon two beasts but it was done in a single attempt, the word "Beast" is part of an expression in this case, therefore no plural.
Page 10 : "This is a feat
will that will in the history of Stromheim!" No big deal. Just take out one "will" and keep the other.