6000 goblins? That's way too much!
They shoulda gone full tilt and go with Ronald Mcdonald, the real king of USAOne gripe I have with this story is that the author is too chicken to use the proper names for countries or people. “Ron Howard” is clearly supposed to be a caricature of Trump but they don’t have the guts to say it.
In the novel that's rookie number6000 goblins? That's way too much!
pg7, "whething" it probably is "whether"
Pg 13, "change" should be "chance"
Last page, "steadyfast" -> "steadfast" minor typos.
I much prefer it that way, and it ages much better when you don't directly shove in current issues, people, or memes. You have a direct trace of "salt bae", people 10 years later looking at it will just think it looks weird. You have a character drawn in their normal art style just in that pose, it's a neat easter egg for those who recognize it, but it's not jarring for those that don't.One gripe I have with this story is that the author is too chicken to use the proper names for countries or people. “Ron Howard” is clearly supposed to be a caricature of Trump but they don’t have the guts to say it.