Dungeon Busters ~Chuunen Otoko desu ga Niwa ni Dungeon ga Shutsugen shita node Sekai wo Sukuimasu~ - Vol. 5 Ch. 25 - Sapporo Dungeon Core

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Thank u always for ur great work...
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The battle looks good, but I feel not fluid enough?
(OωO )...
 
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On the last page, how is his nose casting a shadow over his mouth? The point source of light seems to be just in front of his beard based on how the rest of his face is lit. The artist needs to make up his mind on how he's lighting the characters and casting their shadows.

His jiggle physics though, are pretty good.
 
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On the last page, how is his nose casting a shadow over his mouth? The point source of light seems to be just in front of his beard based on how the rest of his face is lit. The artist needs to make up his mind on how he's lighting the characters and casting their shadows.

His jiggle physics though, are pretty good.
You can't see it from this perspective, but that is not a noise but a beak /jk
 
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The action scenes are so... Messy. I cant tell what the heck is happening in most panels.
 

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