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The premise of MC being a long-lived race and as strong as she is needs to be fleshed out more. Especially when the author brings in the 'remnants of an ancient civilisation' the worldbuilding and timeline become vague. Who came first? What happened to them (the ancients)? Where did the dragon come from and why is it so powerful? How old are the elves compared to the extinct civilisation, the dragon and the demons?
Interesting first chapter though
Interesting first chapter though