Dungeon ni Hisomu Yandere na Kanojo ni Ore wa Nando mo Korosareru

[BuyVelomobiles]

Well, I am pretty grateful for you guys to pick these titles when almost no one was doing them. I maybe wrong but it's just been a long time since I read these titles but I really love you were the guys who did the work.

I'm glad you enjoyed my work! But Yuki is off the table for me. There there's a zone in the wholesome-porn continuum where you have to dial it back, or make porn, and Yuki is right in that awkward region. It's uncomfortable to watch something that's too sexual for me to ignore, but not enough to actually do anything about it.

And sorry for sounding arrogant in my counter-arguments. I am not a native English speaker so sometimes my wording is very poor.

I'll let you in on a little secret: I'm too autistic to notice tone in written messages, so I can't tell if you're being arrogant, mean, or nice. Not that I'd care either way!

Though I would like to send you a DM in Discord so that I can ask out any TL confusions (ofcourse I won't try to poach or recruit you, at least from now, it's just habit of mine to recruit whenever possible and train them).

Well I go by "Dortex" on the scan. And if you've been following our work, then you know how to find a link to the group, if you ever want a place to publicly shame me for fucking up a translation.

Darling was originally a doujinshi scanner so please forgive him for this in lieu of his great contribution to hen- ahem community

Ah, a fellow man of science.

 

[fadingbang]

Well I go by "Dortex" on the scan. And if you've been following our work, then you know how to find a link to the group, if you ever want a place to publicly shame me for fucking up a translation.

I have sent the direct request, will contact you whenever I need help. Thanks!

 

[LonelyDarlingUwU]

I hate how I was not part of this conversation for so long cause I was too busy with other work-
But ha! Now I am going to force myself in

I think it's too small a leap from "I don't like your tone" to "I don't have to listen to you". I've seen it countless times now. Now, I understand not everyone likes having their work dissected, and shit on, like me. But it's important to remember that our harshest critics are often the ones to point out our biggest problems. Sure, they also make up plenty of problems, but that's another issue.

I do get that, actually most of my improvements come from criticisms like where you mentioned "second writer" That point hit too close to the mark- haha but it did make me realize that yeah- maybe I do go too far sometimes to bring out the emotions instead of keeping the originality... BUT! What I meant to say was I love all critics, I still do feel bad reading them sometimes, going like "But I tried so hard to make it nice, why can't you just enjoy..." but then I just switch to "Oh that is a good thing they pointed out, now I can improve in this and make even better work! ", though I didn't think or at least realize that I went to a tone of "I don't have to listen to you"- but if I did, I apologize, I try to keep a fun, happy tone most of the times

I don't know about him, but I'm willing to forgive serious amounts of bullshit if I see a weird line, check the source material, and after a brief squint, think "I mean, they didn't not say that... ". And that's probably where the harshness is coming from: He was hoping you'd at least try and fail to translate, rather than try to "fix" the dialogue.

Hahaha this reminded me of the Mashle episode I was watching a while back, when he defeated Abel and they were celebrating, the subs just said "Yay"- I was so caught off guard with that haha even when he was being faced in trial for having no magic and the clerk side character (I don't remember what he said exactly) and the subs just went like "You, here already?" that was the funniest for me

I will come and nitpick from time to time, though. So look out for my comments on the chapters! They'll probably be about as harsh as @gotl 's, but that's because angry and hostile are my default tone. I'm actually neutral/slightly pleased

I look forward to them! This should keep me on my Toes as well, and what does that mean? EVEN BETTER QUALITY OF WORK! Haha I appreciate the nice conversation we just had, Thank you

DM me if you ever wanna talk about anything. I'm friendlier than I seem.

I will take you up on that offer! you do seem friendly even in the comments, no idea why you felt the need to justify your tone, honestly felt approachable to me

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

though I didn't think or at least realize that I went to a tone of "I don't have to listen to you"- but if I did, I apologize, I try to keep a fun, happy tone most of the times

You'll notice I was talking to @fadingbang , who was "just unhappy about how harsh he was in his criticism". Once you start getting defensive about that, it's a short hop to "Well I don't have to listen to him now".

Hahaha this reminded me of the Mashle episode I was watching a while back, when he defeated Abel and they were celebrating, the subs just said "Yay"- I was so caught off guard with that haha even when he was being faced in trial for having no magic and the clerk side character (I don't remember what he said exactly) and the subs just went like "You, here already?" that was the funniest for me

Yeah, those subs aren't great. And they get worse in the next season.

no idea why you felt the need to justify your tone, honestly felt approachable to me

I just got a month-long ban for criticizing Kyuukei when he made up lines. Then there's LuigyiMario2, who also makes up lines, and has a similar problem with being told that it's not OK.

 

[ErikTheRed]

@LonelyDarlingUwU

I just got a month-long ban for criticizing Kyuukei when he made up lines. Then there's LuigyiMario2, who also makes up lines, and has a similar problem with being told that it's not OK.

Just so you know this is a lie by him.
He did not get banned for criticizing anyone.
He got banned for threatening other users, personal attacks against other users, and for belittling rape victims

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

@LonelyDarlingUwU

Just so you know this is a lie by him.
He did not get banned for criticizing anyone.
He got banned for threatening other users,

He did? What was the threat?

 

[Hanfa98]

13th chapter and it's so good. I love the dialogue between MC and Judith, it gave us the information of the world or Judith past without showing the flashback. So you need to read every dialogue to understand what happened in the story. Really good so far, already put it on my list.

 

[scippo97]

I have read the novel until the ""canon ending"" (basically there is a point where the main plot is considered as concluded, and after that the story gets bullshittingly boring so I didn't care to continue reading after that), so some small spoiler about our favourite big tiddy vampire goth gf:

Spoiler: HEAVY Big tiddy spoiler

She will basically never be seen again and mentioned barely once in about 3-5 years worth of manga or so

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

I have read the novel until the ""canon ending"" (basically there is a point where the main plot is considered as concluded, and after that the story gets bullshittingly boring so I didn't care to continue reading after that), so some small spoiler about our favourite big tiddy vampire goth gf:

Spoiler: HEAVY Big tiddy spoiler

She will basically never be seen again and mentioned barely once in about 3-5 years worth of manga or so

I was going to jump down your throat for posting yet more unprompted spoilers, but frankly, if this is the level of spoiler we had to deal with out in the world, I don't think anyone would complain much about them.

 

[lokiloki]

the mc getting beaten to shit is fun i guess
just hope it doesnt get generic

 

[Jayrrus]

This manga is so getting better. Sadly Judith can't be part of the picture. She is wifey material. Can't wait to see what happens next.

 

[Nutt_lemmings]

Let's fucking go, it almost turned into a generic isekai there boys, but we're back to the loop.

 

[Seraphineopai]

Holy fuck they dialed it up to 10 real quick

 

[jishii]

😦

 

[JojoDBear]

not what i expected for a small read before sleep to be but hey, ill take it as Defibrillator

 

[Entafo]

WN chapter 151 is out after a year hiatus or something

 

[LainWasNotHere]

How do people find actual enjoyment in this? It isn't like RE: Zero, where this is an actual story, this is just the same over and over. Nothing interesting happens, the characters are terrible, and everything else is just soulless. I find there being more enjoyment in looking at my nearby wall rather than reading this.
It fails in all aspects of story writing.

 

[SOSNOKETUPON]

In chapter 13.2 . Man that's rough, buddy

 

[OmnipotentCheese]

Oh man, I am not into torture porn. My life has plenty of hard things, why add to it?

 

[VenomSnake]

Too bad the MC is a young farmer boy who wet his pant at the sight of a monster.
Why the Japanese didn't think of something like "I tried to save everyone in every Soul game but i was isekai-ed to a dungeon which revive me everytime i die"