Early Spring Trembling

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You can reaaaaally tell this is an old story, I can live with the older visual style, but the pacing is really choppy. I was trying to pay attention but I could barely focus on the chain of events. I legitimately feel like I gained just as much information from the synopsis as the chapter itself. So much unnecessary padding for an ultimately quite simple first chapter, delivered at breakneck speed.
 

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