Eiyuu-ou, Bu wo Kiwameru tame Tensei su ~Soshite, Sekai Saikyou no Minarai Kishi♀~ - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

[Lexical]

Gracias! Looking good, the last two chapters were very readable.

 

[Fuistes]

@kawaii123456, @Hollow7F, @MoonlightFairy Thanks for your comments.

@jasty Yes, I used an online translator and grammar checker and I want to thank @Eti2d for suggesting two sites I never heard of.

@Hasshi I'll take note of that.

 

[Fuistes]

@Ironclad The character's name is Inglis as male and female, Chris or Kris is more like a endearment name.

@CookieMunch I know that site, but they uploaded the raws after I released my spanish version of chapter 3.

 

[BookQueen]

that wasn't fair I was lagging

 

[nomadicengi]

Let me guess, the LN or WN is in spanish.... Damn, my spanish is extremely rusty that I think it's better to get a language course for it rather than do a light study for it.

 

[Veruschka]

Oh Noooo, I dont want she grow anymore.........

 

[Axiallax]

Huh.. At first, I thought I saw Dunkerque from AL in the main cover... Never mind...

 

[Dezaki]

"ARE YOU!!??"

here i'm wondering if that's an expression of anger or confusion

 

[Guspaz]

@Dezaki Go back and read the panel before that one.

 

[hedgemoney]

If there is any romance, I hope it doesn't go yuri. I'm tired of gender benders going yuri. At least 50% of them should go straight.

 

[ninjakai03]

@Kurogwane pass me the link i wanna read ahead

 

[azorth]

The dialogue on page 9 made no sense. You may want to pay attention to the meaning rather than the English on this one.

"The divine knight has made a respectable lady's hairs rise to a certain extent, that would make me look like someone who can use magic."

should have been something like,

"As if little better than amateurish magic would work on a divine knight."

Be careful of bad machine translations

 

[RunaVolkov]

Don’t know if I like gender benders with romance at all. I feel like it’s more important to allow the protagonist to have different perspective and appreciate the opposite gender.

And with the MC essentially being an old man, who died of old age, reborn as a girl, it would just feel weird if he had any romantic interests at all. I think it’s funny he takes pride in the beauty he’s going to become, but that should be the extent of that type of thing here.

 

[Mizuho9000]

After reading I understand that the bubble for Are You is a continuation from the previous bubble of the What... part but you could include that in to make it "What Are You!" earlier for some people to understand what that expression meant.

 

[toby0897]

thanks of the chapters

 

[HuevoPodrido]

@RunaVolkov As I man I'm ok with romance in gender bender...as long as we go for the yuri route

 

[dysperwithaperiod]

aaaa.

 

[wotdheck]

translation is much better than the first one. good job and thanks for the chapter

 

[Serenata]

LOL father !!! don't let your daughter fight for such a pity reason xD that cracked me up haha
Muchas gracias por traducir, no se que hago aquí si leo español pero me gusta mucho el manga.

Yo también quiero yuri en esta nueva vida XD

 

[freezzee]

I'm confused with mc name after he reborn is it inglis or cris?