Eiyuu to Majo no Tensei LoveCome - Ch. 4

[Sknite]

You mean she should say that when he was right next to her?

Since we want to play this game, she told that in private when nobody else was around, she did that because in the next chapter she says at the same time, its to giver her a push but if she doesnt act, someone will take him ... like her, that means she is willing to give her "rival" a push but still hopes he picks her.

What other locations? either he wouldnt be present or she wouldnt engage in this conversation, its a "overhearing" cliche I seen many times before, you rather it was in a hot springs? but then we would get into the argument about if she would say anything if there was a chance of him overhearing and there wouldnt be at the very least for the part she talked to herself.

Also we seen again and again, hot baths and springs are common used for socializing so there is nothing strange about this, its all about some people not liking the place for reasons, you rather nothing happened at all? I will say there is a rather interesting bomb dropped at the end of next chapter that kinda explains why this taken place before it.

The scene could happen literally anywhere, any time they don't realize he's there. That could be anywhere. There's absolutely no reason to set the scene specifically in a bathhouse other than a stupid "lucky pervert" cliche for pathetic gooners.

Here's just one example that you could have probably thought of yourself if you bothered to try harder than the author: empty classroom after school. Same scene, no tits necessary. Easy.

I'm starting to feel like you're being deliberately obtuse, so I'm not going to bother trying to explain this extremely simple thing to you any further.

 

[Jstar338]

Came here to say this!

He heard their voices ahead of time, and they are still in the changing room so he could not have seen anything yet.
All he would have to do was explain it.

Is it a Japan culture thing? I know they avoid complaining and drawing attention even when being harassed, which led to Johnny Somali thinking himself so untouchable until South Korea fucked him over.

He got fucked over for entirely different reason

 

[WillTell]

welp, I'm no longer interested

 

[Kurokaze]

She literally got so jealous that she thought man I used to have big titties

I mean... She did.

 

[phil777]

So. I dunno about you guys, but when I'm completely submerged in water, I can't hear what's on the surface.

 

[jasty]

Wtf.. the most obvious thing to do is to call out and say "Hey I'm in here!"

There's no reason to hide or escape if you've done nothing wrong.

 

[Shamgarsan]

My problem with the cliche is the cowardly lampshading. Calling out your stupid cliche only draws attention to it. If he had just jumped immediately to some insane conclusion like “I’m the Hero, I can just slow my metabolism to a crawl and hide underwater from 30 minutes,” complete with some underwater-yet-mountaintop zen meditation imagery I would have been amused.

Authors, if you want to include some stupid cliche because you think it would be fun, then embrace it. Don’t half-ass it, don’t wink at the audience. Just go for it without reservation and have fun.