Eiyuu to Majo no Tensei LoveCome

[UrAvgReader-v2]

Initial premise is good but the pacing of the story and characters are all over the place, author need to expand their horizons and learn to cook better..

 

[Guesto]

I like the story until ch 9, story become so much boring. 4/10

 

[national14578]

wtf is this fanservice

 

[Lord_Bogus]

I fail to see what interesting outcome this can have, what is the goal? The black haired witch lord girl had a condition and he could help her with it, they kissed in ch.1 but we are 13 chapters in and nothing has come from that yet

 

[TheLastSad]

ts might be peak???

 

[GhostX64]

If I had a nickel for every story that had flat chested girl as FMC and was trash one sided written story, I would be a billionaire today.

Also making the childhood friend fawn over him like that makes me question the credibility of writing ability of the author.