Elf Dorei to Kizuku Dungeon Harem - Isekai de Netotte Nakama o Fuyashimasu

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most of the erotic scenes is too half-assed
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Ugh. How is it that there are only three chapters and it still feels like a slog to get through?

...oh, right. The shit writing and the bad art, that's why. The first chapter was...fine, if kind of stereotypical. But just because a story is predictable doesn't mean it's bad, so I kept going. That was a mistake. An immediate deep-dive into sex, which would be fine if the art wasn't awkward and the dialogue so cringetacular as to make me question whether the writer has ever had sex without money changing hands first.

This is so bad. Just so unbelievably terrible. C- for the art, D- for the 'plot'. I've seen a dozen stories far superior to this cancelled out of hand, and yet this one somehow exists. Truly, there is no god.

2/10, do not recommend. The only thing that isn't utterly forgettable about it is just how garbage it is.
 
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I think this is the first time i see a non-futa work from this artist, lets see how long it lasts
 

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