Elqueeness - Ch. 65

[MangaDex]

 

[Negiomi]

EEEEEE CLIFFHANGER

 

[Wataterp]

OKOKOK. The dragon's name should be "Lapis" not "La'piece". Hopefully this gets fixed in the next chapter.

 

[Wataterp]

Another one. I thought the demon king and the demon god were separate beings? Why is the demon king the god now?

 

[greyymarmalade]

hmm, some TL lines were a bit confusing and incohesive. I guess proofread a bit better. I hope the new staff does well in the future! cheers

 

[nfzeta]

The prose of the tl are a bit too rigid, some contractions and shortening syntax here and there would be better.

 

[greyinthedark]

Thanks for the chapter! I'm always thrilled to read a new chapter of this one, and Lapis' totally inability to read the room is a constant delight... to me, anyway, if not to El.

 

[immortalartisan]

Bit to verbose. They sound less like people and more like my collage professors during lectures.

 

[Tierra]

Eh, like the other people said, some words double, some words missing. Some very awkward wording and wrong choice of words. You need a proofreader at the very least. (And translating the SFX would be nice too)
Also, spotted some sloppy cleaning. It's white bubbles without transparency. Shouldn't be too hard to clean off all the text? lel

 

[gabie]

Thank you for translating!

 

[osqmu]

thanks for the chapter

 

[fictionsBFF]

I agree with what others said but thank you for translating.

 

[berryoragami]

Thanks for the chapters!!
There were some awkward wordings here and there as well as missing words sometimes so yes I think it needs a bit more proofreading and editing

 

[IceCubed]

Did you also change proofreader? I actually feel like i have no idea what happened/was said in the last half of this chapter.

 

[1234muse]

woooo thanks...
mermaid el is cute

 

[Lux066]

Thank you for the chapter! Excited for the next one

 

[Queen1500]

I have no idea what was said at the beginning. It doesnt read right