Emergency Stairway

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huh.. alright then. Wouldn’t really recommend reading this as I find that this story just gives off a stagnant feeling.
-also, just to clarify, it’s not that the story is “bad” per say, but it’s just that there’s not really much too it.
That’s just how I feel about it though so I suppose others may enjoy it

Also, although I didn’t really enjoy the story, thank you to the group that translated this for your guys’ effort that you put into making this readable for others and everything else that was done ♡
 
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I’ll be the first dissenting opinion to @sadbigtittygothgirl. It ended so soon, but I actually really liked this one! Wholesome ending, sexy scenes, hot boys. 🥵 Some scenes were quite unnecessary considering the length, and it really feels like this could be drawn out into many, many more chapters (or as if that’s how it is meant to be), but for some reason there’s only three. That specifically is what makes my heart sad. There’s a lot there in terms of plot, and a lot of room for character development/exploration of depth.
Sprinkle in some more mafia drama and bring the bro back into frame, along with the romance building, and this would be SO FIRE. There are so many directions this story could go, I firmly believe that it was meant for 50 chapters or more. Three is just not enough for a plot like this. Plus, sex in the hallway of a hotel? That was 13/10 my kind of dirty boi yaoi!

Overall though, I loved the hard-working brother and the persistent pursuit of him. Thank you MMS 🥰
 
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