Enzai de Shikei ni Sareta Otoko wa [Ryakudatsu] no Skill wo ete Yomigaeri Fukushuu wo Oukasuru - Ch. 1

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So they recorded him for hours, starved him, admitted it on tape, admitted to falsifying his testimony for personal gain and then only used a small excerpt of the interview as his confession. And at no point in the very public trial did he think to demand the full tape be played. Man his lawyer must have sucked
 
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Cum? I'm reading some ppl saying something about it but I reread it and didn't find it, weird
 
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Very contrived trial. If he had access to even the most average lawyer, this one short admission of guilt alone wouldn't stand in any proper trial. I've heard a lot about the flawed japanese court system, but I don't think it is that flawed.

I can understand that the author didn't want to spend too much time on the prologue. Cheap intro for a barely believable case of "killed with strong resentment". The investigator is so cartoonishly evil he breaks any semblance of credibility.

Otherwise, the art so far is below average and the start of the competition seems stupid. The whole thing should be started for everybody at the same time. Here, a system such as "Battle in five seconds", with at least a first phase where the competitors are on equal starting grounds, would make much sense. This reincarnation cup looks more like "Darwin game", that starts with a setting closer to mobile games than a proper competition.

Also, is the reincarnation cup an actual public event? Or is the translation completely off? The MC seems to know something about it even before the masked girl went into details.
(Edit: scratch that last part. It's just a jumbled mess because of usual MTL mistakes and random switches between the narrator's exposition and the masked character's explanations.)

I'll read the next chapter, but this first chapter feels off on so many levels.
 
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Don't even remember following this one, but after reading the first chapter here that's a quick unfollow.
 
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This is just trash plain and simple. If you're gonna make your MC have a tragic story, at least make it believable.
 
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Ignoring the random CUM thing. This is just bad, art is shit, story is bland, the beginning is very bad, this is twisting the whole "japanese law enforcement is not very good" way too far. I'm not even sure if it's worth looking at the second chapter...
so i wasnt the only one who smelled the trash from the otherside of the window..
 
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man this prologue just bs, its not even like he in park or shady place, he practically witness murder in his own home and why the hell the neighbours going crazy and think he's the suspect, also why he got sudden arrest and not even attorney (evil or not) involve? like this shit so bad because how unrealistically too convenient for the police bastard story :questionblob:
 

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