Eroi Koto Suru Tame ni Kyonyuu Bishoujo Dorei o Katta Hazu ga, Oshishou-sama to Shitawa Rete Omotta Toori ni Ikanaku Naru Hanashi - Vol. 2 Ch. 8 - Th…

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Ehhhhhh..... idk, I think that might've overdone it and broken my suspension of disbelief. Sure communication disorders are a thing but she only gets out like 1 of every 10 words.... At that point just write what you want to say; even though that trope has been practically done to death, so has the "they're scary because they can't speak well" trope.
 
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I like how this story started with the MC being a major hornball who wanted a sex slave and now she has turned into a harem protagonist that has 2 women who love her living with her.

Looking forward for more! Thank you for the translation!
 
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It's double gay now. Also misunderstanding. Misundergayding. ???.
 
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Poor girl. I really hope she gets used to communicating and can tell the MC her true feelings and how happy she is to have her as a friend
 
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Ehhhhhh..... idk, I think that might've overdone it and broken my suspension of disbelief. Sure communication disorders are a thing but she only gets out like 1 of every 10 words.... At that point just write what you want to say; even though that trope has been practically done to death, so has the "they're scary because they can't speak well" trope.
This isn't quite as pronounced in the original Japanese, although it's still bad. Translating to English will add words, and I inserted misheard keywords into the intended speech when those words could have been made up of multiple fragments. I also tried to do so without corrupting the actual meaning, leading to longer phrasing.

Essentially, her intended words were made more verbose due to the translation.
 
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poor shiina, she's just like me

and maybe she just cant write well enough for that to be an option? since its a "books are so expensive you can only buy them in the nobles district" kinda setting
 

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