I still want to know why the artist draws her as though it's even possible as a human to achieve hips like Chamber.
Page 3 is good. Page 20...not so much.
Less about being unachievable in scope, more about just borked anatomy. She has her posterior musculature in her hips growing to the sides and it combined with the proximal ends of the thigh connecting ones growing past her hip bone and over her obliques. That's not how it works, no matter how you fashion yourself. Those are partly the things why extreme BBL/bottom implants look anatomically so disturbing (pure tissue with no connection adding up to the two stuck together lollipops -look), but with the added benefit of musculature connecting to more soft tissue and not bone. The rear views are more or less fine, but most front and side profiles of her hips are just fundamentally wack. Just taking the usual artistic license to scale a more normal wide hip profile to like 1.2 scale and then connecting it logically would end up with a better result.
That added to all the other fuckery (tit's yoyo-ing in size and her rib cage doing the same to some silly degrees) make her more like some amorphous shapeshifter and not a human. The good parts are great and and those combined into a single whole would be amazing, sadly it's not that.
I still love the idea and the general vibe of this story so far, though.