Erotic x Anabolic - Vol. 3 Ch. 27

[MangaDex]

 

[HartSkai]

those proportions are western cartoon level, jesus her ribs are caved in

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[yefta03]

is she jealous because his childhood friend knows about his favorite lunch food?

 

[AutoRedux]

those proportions are western cartoon level, jesus her ribs are caved in

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It irks me so much.

Page 12 and the bottom right of 24 show that she could look actually sexy if achumuchi wasn't such a git.

 

[Mangamoz]

those proportions are western cartoon level, jesus her ribs are caved in

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What ribs?

 

[themanthemyth]

strange strange strange double page... looks so awkward

 

[Ozznik]

You can do it author-san! Become the best tap dancer in the world!

 

[onipuck]

While we normally critique the waist, there doesn't seem to be any sign of the hips either.
As in, it goes straight from the pencil waist to the thighs, like on a really poorly made doll.

Once more, I'm still struggling with anatomy when it comes to drawing, but I've come to understand the basics of it, and that is the thinner the person is the more the body's lines contour to their bones, and she is missing her pelvic bone.

 

[attractdistract]

Author wants to be a tap dancer? Go go go!