Escort Warrior

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I hope some group picks this backup and finishes the last 44 chapters

as for the story
it got worse somewhat as time passed
due to plot retardation and inconsistency

I like the MC and the storyline so I wanted to like this a lot more. But so many plot issues.

I still recommend reading it.
Score 7-8/10

--MC bullied an enemy and hurt his leg multiple times, MC is also faster than him, but somehow he just stumbled upon the area when all the other cast grouped up and attacked the old man, HOW did that happen with our FAST MC lol

--The whole fight with the Pang/Paeng family
-----When they went to the Unsu /whatever mountain with the rock salt,
WHY wasn't any 3rd party Government or Murim Alliance official there to verify the claim ??
WHY was it only the Jang family and Pang family people??
WHY did the JANG family GIRL go there?? The son already went so why did the girl need to go?? Why cripple the MC and Muke even further??

What are you smoking author?

------MC suddenly decides he will train in martial arts again
WHY do allies and enemies know where MC went to train and hide his colleague's secret books?
WHY does MC not hide the books before running back to save the group? In the past, he threw his shield-like weapon cause it would delay him from taking the doctor to save the JANG girl who got poisoned. Sure same logic can apply here, but this is clearly something your DEAD colleagues gave you, respect where?
 

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