HiRock isn’t the best writer. He tends to follow clichés, overdone tropes, include (unnecessary) fan-service nudity, etc. Definitely has room for improvement. On the other hand, however, he manages to establish gripping mysteries (and satisfying conclusions to them), relatable characters, existential dilemmas and some really cool scenes and concepts. There are moments where he completely takes me by surprise at how good of a writer he actually CAN be.
In this specific case, I’m referring to the flashback of Molau, from Elmira’s perspective. HiRock just nails “show don’t tell” in all the right ways. In only A SINGLE PAGE (not even a whole page, mind you), with zero dialogue, he manages to convey to us the reason why Molau ended up the way he did. So many writers have their villains be evil for the sake of being evil, without any real reason behind it. HiRock only had us believe the same is going on here. But he shattered our expectations in the best possible way, breaking away from clichés and predictable story directions. HiRock tackled this with realism. You might call Molau a monster, but all he is, is a human being. Everything has a reason for being the way it is.
We can see that Molau was elected through, what we can assume was, a democratic election. The people of Muanji were cheering him on. With his position came a lot of responsibility. Under (to us) unknown circumstances, his ratings were falling and he was being abandoned by everyone. The only loyal companion that remained by his side was Elmira. An android. He was a man under a lot of pressure. Pressure that, tragically, got to him. He snapped.
Now, am I defending Molau’s actions? Not one bit. I’m merely pointing out that he was but a flawed creature, like everyone else, which could be why he was so obsessed with his dream of an android utopia. A place devoid of strife, pressure and emotions that lead to conflict. I though that Leon was going to be the only tragic character here, but Molau somehow managed to overtake that position. Very unexpected, indeed.
This is just speculation, but I think that there’s also some social commentary mixed in here. People tend to look at things from only one perspective. In this case: “Molau is a monster!” We rarely ask: “How/Why is Molau the way he is?” We often look at the news and blindly accept the surface information we’re given as definitive proof of something being true/false or right/wrong. We don’t look further than what’s in front of us. In this stories’ case, the world, Leon and the protagonists only see Molau as a twisted, psychotic dictator. They only see one side of the coin. They don’t know, or will know, that he was once a “normal” man who simply couldn’t bear the wight of responsibility and the despair of failure. He was just a human.
This is excellent storytelling!
In other news, I’m glad that the whole “what does it mean to be a human/android” conundrum, that all the characters were going on about, came to a close. I was fearing that we wouldn’t get some kind of conclusion for that (at least in this arc). I’m also interested to see what the consequence is for all that has happened with NORAD and the satellites. And we can’t forget Nguyen, of course. What was his end goal? It appears that the protagonists secured both EX-ARMs.
While the first arc was undeniably lackluster, the second one was a big step forward. This arc, however, sets the bar WAYYY too high, imo. There’s virtually nothing bad I can say about it (maybe a reread will reveal something, although I highly doubt that). Nevertheless, I’m excited to see where the story goes, as long as the writing remains this good (or becomes even better).
@Talon13184 Thank you so much for scanlating this series! It’s clear that I’m in love with it. I only hope that you’re enjoying it yourself, as well, and aren’t forcing yourself to scanlate it. Can’t wait for the next arc!