Oh nice an update. Its quite long compared to previous updates used to be that I was worried it was dropped. Thanks for still continuing.
Anyaya things I like:
There's more gravita to Rin shutting down the sun. That it took some sacrifice for her so that's nice.
Interesting that Leo comment that Nero NP is beautiful and calls it a light. Its the consistent reaction upon someone witnessing Nero NP such as Altera. In Last Encore you can see Gawain is a bit in daze too when Nero summon her NP.
As for Leo calling it a light I had theory that servant Nero symbolizes the light side of Rome while the beast Draco symbolizes the dark side of Rome.
Nero vs Gawain more or less the same as anime, ended with NP clash that Nero (and subsequently Hakuno) won.
Leo and Gawain last talk, and ultimately also Nero and Hakuno proving their ways. They're pretty nice. Its nice the manga gives more expression to Leo and Gawain thus making the scene hit more.