Fate/Koha-Ace - Ch. 12

[MangaDex]

 

[kyoyagaen123]

Firstly, sorry for the repeated delays. The "poem" was hard to translate.

Secondly, sorry if the poem was hard to read. If it seems like gibberish, I can't change it because this is the best I can do. If it is hard to read (placement is bad) that is because Japanese scripts is quite different from English, and hence the awkward placement. BUT, if you do have a suggestion about how to place it to make it clearer, please tell me ASAP so that I can change and re-upload the chapter.

Finally, for future chapters, there will be a portion where it is like a word story is told in Japanese style (right to left). Do you want it to remain the Japanese way (right to left) or change it to a more Western style (up to down)? Please respond, as this part is urgent.

Thanks!

 

[MASON980]

Thanks for the translation.

For the first poem I think just putting a note below the box to say the reading order is top to bottom would be enough. Although it is understandable when you try each way so I don't think it's an issue.
The second one fits with what most manga seems to have so there probably isn't any need to change it.

And I wouldn't mind whether the future chapter's one is one way or the other. As long as it's obvious (again maybe by using a translation note to specify).

 

[dive123]

Thanks for the chapter, translator-san
I'm also fine with the chapter as long as the meaning of translation is clear. My problem might be only the font of the poem's word, a bit hard to read.
Still, once again thanks for the hardwork

 

[KeiosKod]

Heck. This scene is bound to be pretty awesome in Redline.

 

[farranpoison]

Oooh man, I can't wait for this scene in Redline.

Also it's really surprising just how deep and serious this story can be even with the chibi artstyle.

 

[xSauriaNx]

@kyoyagaen123 I think the poem placement is fine... it was a bit harder to read at first due to the font else it's nothing to be considered hard to read...


not unless my dyslexia and my compulsion to correct kicks in...

man DW should've made her Haori the NP in the game and basically do Large Quick Damage upon Single Enemy.
the animation should've included spawning the people under her squad and basically, MELEEING THE ENEMY TILL FEAR QUIVERS FROM ITS EYES AND HUZZAH! DIE YOU SCHMUCKLORD!!!

 

[kyoyagaen123]

Ok I'll take all your advice in mind for future chapters, since this chapter was not totally unreadable.

@dive123 @xSauriaNx The original font was something similar to a Eastern brush font, and this was the most similar font I could find. (The original was quite hard to read as well) But if it really is so difficult to read, I'll try find another font.

 

[Saybah]

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