Couple of minor mistakes, about halfway through Timerra has a blank textbox, and the move Griss uses is supposed to be "Ragnarok Warp" rather than "Warp Ragnarok" (both moves exist, in-game Griss uses the prior for this chapter. You can tell which one it's supposed to be as the order of the words matches whether the warp comes before or after the Ragnarok blast)