Fuguu Skill no Renkinjutsushi, Henkyou o Kaitaku Suru
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Hm, this is kind of... bad?
The alchemy system is not consistent and the world at large seems to follow simplistic game rules rather than physics.
The MC got the memories of a modern person handed to him, in one panel. We don't even learn his name or occupation on Earth. I can already tell it will have absolutely zero impact.
There is very little in the way of plot. The MC shows up and magically makes things better, Everybody is extremely impressed. The end.
Over all, 5/10. I think the author might simply be stupid or, charitably, maybe twelve years old.
The alchemy system is not consistent and the world at large seems to follow simplistic game rules rather than physics.
The MC got the memories of a modern person handed to him, in one panel. We don't even learn his name or occupation on Earth. I can already tell it will have absolutely zero impact.
There is very little in the way of plot. The MC shows up and magically makes things better, Everybody is extremely impressed. The end.
Over all, 5/10. I think the author might simply be stupid or, charitably, maybe twelve years old.
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Narrow world and storytelling. The only good point is the art.
Story, introduction, rhythm, world are very bad even his personality shows how much boastful and arrogant he is when he introduced himself.
Honestly I don’t like this self centered pacifists vibes.
Story, introduction, rhythm, world are very bad even his personality shows how much boastful and arrogant he is when he introduced himself.
Honestly I don’t like this self centered pacifists vibes.
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@InkuNinja what happened to your chapters here?
I don't know, probably mods deleted it
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