Man, I skimmed through the whole thing and I'm disappointed to find out that this guy never once showed a nice toothy smile. Do you know the kind of power you could have over people if you smiled at them with the psychotic, jagged teeth of a zombie? Wasted potential, I should have his teeth.
Otherwise ok romance story if you actually care about it, doesn't get convoluted and has actual focus unlike other love stories I've seen.