Fukushuuki Laura: Onee-sama o Ikenie ni Shita Kono Kuni wa Mou Iranai - Ch. 13.1
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Poor guy, he got all hyped up all for it to end in an instant.
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Can you stick to a spelling for the kingdom's name? It changes every page.
Page 4 You clearly butchered the title here.
Page 12 The MTL doesn't work here at all. "Engage" doesn't sound anything like "Demon Contract."
Page 15 Not even reading the your own work. "Esther" is clearly not a "she."
Really the chapter is split in the middle of a spread and you didn't care enough to combine them?
Page 4 You clearly butchered the title here.
Page 12 The MTL doesn't work here at all. "Engage" doesn't sound anything like "Demon Contract."
Page 15 Not even reading the your own work. "Esther" is clearly not a "she."
Really the chapter is split in the middle of a spread and you didn't care enough to combine them?
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