Fuufu de Itonamu Monster Farm ~Mezase, Mattari Slow Life~ - Vol. 1 Ch. 5.2

[zeever]

Kinda boring and seems like the author doesn't know how to draw action panel. Author also most likely not a hardcore gamer, especially games like MMORPG

 

[Eddnom]

• MMORPG story with a game that is nothing like how a MMORPG would be designed (a superboss specifically designed to hunt down and screw over people who just started the game, really?)
• After chapter 2, the chapters were on the shorter side. Even when both halves are combined, this chapter only had 22 pages (and two of them where used for full-page spreads)
• Making the previous issue even worse, author insists on wasting time trying to add tension when it is all void from it being a just game. It would have been better as an isekai, which is a weird thing to say
• Meh art (some of the proportions are wacky)
• Already 5 chapters in and, outside of the preview chapter, there hasn't been much focus on slow-life monster petting/bonding. You know, the main premise of this manga

Yeah, I'm calling it here. This reeks of "axed before 20 chapters".

 

[Alcion]

So death in the game is literally just respawning back at the inn. So much drama and crying from them acting like their character will be erased or lose all of their equipment if they die and instead it's literally spawning back at the inn. Heck, the dark elf is probably there anyways, so he just fast traveled back to her.

Standard speedrunner tech~

Probably. It's hinted that they would get periodically harassed by this boss. Imagine playing your game then every 30 mins, a random train ran you over and you were forced to respawn. You wouldn't be able to play the game. Maybe THAT'S why the guy in the previous chapter was upset and warning players that if they kill too many rabbits, they wouldn't be able to play the game anymore. I dunno. Playing devil's advocate here.

Captain Hector!

 

[Apep23]

Hope this series is a long one, thoroughly enjoyed every second that I’ve spent reading this. Thanks to the tl team!