the concept for this manga has legs but what we got is less than satisfactory. there are good moments here and there, and even a few good chapters. but the key elements and focus didn't work out.
i want to see an iteration that will actually let the mc make the transition from shoujo to ero, and focus on the manga creation process.
unfortunately, the manga seems to just think that the concept would make for funny jokes and i tend to not like kawashita mizuki's sense of humor. i hate g-maru and generally distaste kawashita's brand of pervy characters.