Gabriel DropOut - Ch. 116

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And a double release to catch up!... is what I wanted to say, but the next chapter dropped already. I'm not salty enough to change my release plans tho. It's business as usual for me from tomorrow so expect it somewhere mid-week. Had to turn me PC on to upload these anyway so might as well start cleaning it.
Also, in 114, changed the ambiguous line, and a typo I randomly found on last page.
 
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I'm pretty worried, Tapris doesn't really know how to say no. At least she'll have Kurona to protect her
even gab know tapris have her own demon gf to protect her ...

that why she dont want to butt in...
 
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Love the idea, but hate its execution. Tapris has just learned the whole philosophy of life. Also, thanks for the double release! Your time management is much better than mine, I have to admit.
 
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@nicoelson Side note to the student responsibilities debate/culture:
there’s a weird side effect of students cleaning (context: have worked at 3 jr highs in 2 prefectures) which is that student spaces stay clean but the teachers’ spaces get neglected.
Well, I woudn't see it as weird, cleaning is something in my experience most people do begrudginly for their own places, so cleaning somewhere else is basically only done if forced to.
 
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Thanks for the chapters! A few pointers:
  • Page 4: truble -> trouble
  • Page 12: puddin -> pudding, wan't -> wasn't
And when writing text vertically, I think it makes more sense to put the first line on the right, since we're going right to left.
Also, a mistake that nearly every typesetter makes, but notice how the dialogue font has two "I"s, one with serifs and one without? The serif I is only meant for the personal pronoun "I", otherwise you should use the sans serif one. (But everyone keeps mixing them randomly)
Anyway, nice work.
 
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Thanks for the chapters! A few pointers:
  • Page 4: truble -> trouble
  • Page 12: puddin -> pudding, wan't -> wasn't
And when writing text vertically, I think it makes more sense to put the first line on the right, since we're going right to left.
Also, a mistake that nearly every typesetter makes, but notice how the dialogue font has two "I"s, one with serifs and one without? The serif I is only meant for the personal pronoun "I", otherwise you should use the sans serif one. (But everyone keeps mixing them randomly)
Anyway, nice work.
Thanks. I'll fix it next time. I swear I do proof them. I really should stop making things harder on myself and script in word instead of np++...
So you mean the "Double T" I for first person, and just a stick for anything else? I should see how that works on these cartoon fonts.
 
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Thanks for the TL. I think the ending line means something more like "Let's/I'll work hard so I don't get "dealt with" by the students" instead of the students getting dealt with by Kurona.
 
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Thanks for the TL. I think the ending line means something more like "Let's/I'll work hard so I don't get "dealt with" by the students" instead of the students getting dealt with by Kurona.
生徒 is the target (verb done to) of に処されない, right, unless I'm forgetting some grammar rule with passives and negatives, and shouldn't it be in causative 処させない for that? I also think it makes more overall sense with the whole chapter being about her doubts, and Kurona using that very kanji 2 pages back too. Passing it through Deepl gives me both, maybe it's meant to be ambiguous for both? I'll add it to the TL notes next time.1000304917.jpg
 
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People always guide other to what they can't do. There is not a wiser person than Gabriel to guide you through the correct path
 

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