GATE - Jieitai Kanochi nite, Kaku Tatakaeri - Ch. 126

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What, so they issue a total retreat due to "losing contact" despite being able to literally just send a messenger through the gate right in the center of the base to check what's wrong? Well that's just moronic.
 
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I'm surprised they (police and JSDF) have not established a joint special response force for these kinds of situations and for securing the GATE. they have instead relied on regular riot police personnel from the TMPD and JSDF garrison personnel from across the gate to respond when stuff goes down
 
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This story really hurts from how it is constantly hopping between different plotlines. Keeps on trying to raise tension, then blunders it all by changing scene to somewhere else entirely. And repeat. Both extremely rapidly inducing readers fatigue, and overall just hurting each plotline too, alongside any pacing.

The whole "war" vs "kidnapping" stuff is bad enough by itself, but then inside the "war" plotline there's like 3 or 4 concurrent ones currently (princess vs prince, helis vs wyverns, assault vs bait).
 
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The story kinda spins its wheels, kek.
A few dozen chapters covering a short hospital stay and a one-day operation.
 

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